All Comments on 'Teacher Is Mistaken Ch. 18'

Good stuff. Can't wait to see how the story develops now that the pony girls are back in the picture. And this ambassador's wife? That could be very interesting, and I think it could use a spin-off all its own.

I see you have her slipping slowing into the non-con slave role with all of her self-imposed controls removed and her enjoying it. What's next? Piercings? Tattoo? Blackmail?

The best story yet. I could be Hollie. Don't even quit telling this story

This is what hollie needed. i think this new master will be great. Maybe this master will at least let her work outside of the home and have a normal life so to say. great chapter. i'm not surprised that nathaniels wife and daughter were so embedded into the pony girl role they were there long enough. can't wait for more :-)

I'm wondering if you could divide the story into two separate main stories now to give each the attention they need until they collide together again in the future. I've always enjoyed the way you tease the characters but now you are not spending the proper time with each one.

i commend the author for continuing this story, but for me, the excitement has gone out of it. the early chapters were among the best of all time, but now...i think the story can be saved if angela becomes the main character and we see her humiliation and subjugation by roger. bye, hollie, you seem to have found what you desire.