All Comments on 'Teacher Is Mistaken Ch. 20'

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pheobecharmedpheobecharmedover 10 years ago

so glad to see a new chapter post. i'm wondering what he decided to do. personally i hope he developed a heart and didn't give her to the fraternity. i can't wait to find out what happens to Angela to submit or to rebel that is the ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

personally i think this series has taken it's course. in places it is a great work, but in others a bit too verbose. perhaps you should find a good point soon where you can wrap this story up.

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07over 10 years agoAuthor
Agreed

I shouldn't succumb to readers requests so readily. Enjoyed writing this series, which actually started as a one chapter story. In places it has meandered along through self indulgence, which an editor would have helped tighten up. That's what happens with free stories, If I was paid I would be a lot more professional. One more chapter on the way, Gary

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Superb - Keep going

Thoroughly enjoyed the series I like long series gives time for characters to develop with the story lines

keep going will roger and Hollie reunite? I hope so punishment expected

Iggy_ManIggy_Manover 10 years ago
actually...

I was rather hoping to see the taming of Angela. After the way she dominated Hollie, it would be great to see her subjected to training. Yes, the story has wandered. But I still come back for the new bits, don't I?

I would love to see a sequel, actually, centered around Angela and her struggle against her training.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Dear Sir,

I am curious to know is there is really no way back to the course of CH1-6? Or could you please consider writing similar stories to "Teacher is mistaken" or "Teacher"?

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