All Comments on 'Teacher Lust'

very rushed and very rough. i like the content and basis of the story, now just clean up and expand on all of the individual "scenes" and this would be great!

An editor would help smooth out your story, even if you would edit your own work by rereading the work before posting.

The passion is in your work, so it won't take much to refine your stories into excelence.

Thanks for the post.

This wasn't a bad story. Your spelling and grammar need serious help, though. I'm the real Nikki Palmer and I write erotica for a living. Here's a link to one of my free stories. I think you'll read it and never go back.

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/77765

"Well you see here kev, this is where you are struggling at...."

It's "what you're struggling with" or "where you're struggling".

Life imitating art's a bitch.