by jackie_em
Page one seemed mildly plausible, but by Page 2, it was so over the top as to be no longer sexy.
Damn this was super hot,! Very nice ending too, getting caught. I mean it's hot and sexy. More pleas. Great job.
It is rather over the top, but to be honest, stories that are really over the top, but don't take themselves too seriously, and are well written, can actually be rather sexy....
This is one of my favorites, hoping there is a sequel someday.
Great work. Thanks