by Malomar
I couldn't stop until I read the complete series. Although a fiction (fantasy), it was told in a style that made the whole thing believable. Sometimes a bit "over the top", but for sure, a terrific "coming of age" story.
Thanks for a great read,
Bob
Based on the wording in the story it sounds like the last chapter has ended - what a shame as. . .
Great pace and very realistic story line. With every woman and girls I've been with, the initial feel of their hymen ring and snugness of their vaginas made the greatest impression on my cock as well as their reaction. The devil is in the details.
Super job on your part!
Enjoyed the story overall. A few inconsistencies though. Example, when he gets to Kathy’s in the end, she said she knew about Linda by following him and saw them kiss. But then later on Kathy appears upset about his relationship with Linda. She thought Joey slept with Tina.