All Comments on 'Teacher Trained as Slave Ch. 09'

... as we are now familiar with the 5 characters, new combinations and a faster pace make sense - and keep the suspense going. And no excess clutter, either.

One could start to compare it to well composed symphonies. Different parts with their own themes, rhythms, melodies and dynamics. Wonderful. This tale becomes addictive.

Thanks and best regards, S

All 9 chapters have been good. However this story can’t end like this. Probably need 2 more chapters!