All Comments on 'Teacher's Pest Ch. 01'

Absolutely LOVED this one! BOTH naughty and nice. Characters are well developed, story is incrfediibly well written. THIS author put lovinggg tendder care into crafting ths one. True love mixed with humor and THE HOTTEST SEX!!! Can I score it a 10?

This is a wonderful story, not hurried but not lagging either.

Wow the chemistry is scorching. Love the story soo much! Please don't leave us hanging.....next one please!

Absolutely wonderful love story, it's the kind of story I can get into, it has the right amount of sex along with the love felt between two people.

It was a fun story to read and I'll be waiting for the next one.

You are a very gifted writer.

Thanks

Started reading, couldn't stop! Take us to the next as soon as you are ready...we surely are!

You combine a wonderful storyline, with a totally credible plot. BUT best of all, your syntax, grammar and construction make your work a joy to read.

Please burn the midnight oil to bring us the next chapter. The romance, feeling and empathy are tremendous!!!

Could I ask you to keep the relationship between these two and not try to introduce her mother into a threesome, even though shee seems to be very worldly and tolerant.

"Average" story......but nice.

Could have been hotter though.....Too Much Disclosure (TMD) in the build up to sex; too obvious....but still sexy.

5 thumbs up....

I LOVE THIS STORY. CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!

Couldn't put it down. When is chapter II coming out?

I look forward to more.

This story was terrific - realistic, easy to read, sexy, and put together very well.

This is one of the best I have read on this site - can't wait to read Chapter 2!

That was a ride! Superb, simply superb. So descriptive, excellent settings, great characters, and highly erotic! The Jeopardy segment was wonderful.

Your pen name may say 'Average' but I guarantee you your stories are anything but.

Looking forward to Ch2!

Thank you!

M1

I wish I was Dave. Awesome story!

...but pretty good, all the same. Four stars.

Wonderful storytelling and pace to it. As for the previous anonymous posting that there was too much smaltz, go and find another author if this isn't your thing. This is a very well crafted story with fantastic interplay between the characters. If you want a slam bang thank you ma'am story there are others here.

Keep this story going. 5 STARS! ! !

Now on to chapter 2. I am looking forward to reading it.

I find it amusing that the student that is always correcting her teacher makes a misquote when she quotes "Methinks the lady doth protest to much" from Shakespeare's Hamlet. Presumably this is because the author made a minor mistake as the line actually goes "The lady doth protest too much methinks.". Since the misquote is extremely common, I don't hold it against author or story at all, though I can hope that the misquote way done on purpose to add a bit of irony to the story for Shakespeare fans to pick up on.

this is a really good story and very real. Keep up the good work.

It was incredible! Excellent story. I normally don't read much but I read this whole story in one sitting. It is now 5 AM and I'm going to bed but great job!

I loved every bit of this! The plot and character development as well as erotic scenes were great. Mr. B - I mean, Dave - and Tiffany are both genuinely likeable characters, not just sex objects, and it's great to see love in an erotica story instead of just animalistic urges. This story is amazing :)

One of the best erotic stories I have ever read. If I could give 7 stars I would have.

Had a great time reading your story.

Great banter, would enjoy a bit more detail in their love making, but a nice 'chemistry' between the characters ;)

M

You have no idea how GORGEOUS this piece was to me. It was really well thought out and written. There is no doubt in my mind that Tiff is a WOMAN. You made me want her too. :)

There is no doubt you can write either!

100 out of 5 stars!!!

I thought kiddie porn was not permitted? or did I miss something? Oh my, it is forbidden? No? This is a high school girl? How old. Oh, she was left back, I see, she is 23, ok. Write on...

To Anonymous: You need to read more carefully before launching accusations of kiddie porn. The story is clearly written in the context of graduating from high school. On page 2, I clearly stated: "At eighteen, she was more mature than most of her peers." This meets both Literotica standards and all social norms with regard to adulthood. I have never written kiddie porn and never will. It's astonishing that you would make such a serious accusation without reading what's written. Or are your reading skills such that I need to show the number 18 rather than spelling the word "eighteen"?