to remember that there's no actual physical sex between these two at this point because the tension is SO thick! Great job! Excellent (literate) writing and good characterization!
When I have time to write, which isn't often enough, I draw partly on experience (much of which is with author Ethyllene), and partly on fantasy. The characters are all based on real people. I also write sometimes under RedTang. I appreciate your votes, comments and feed...