All Comments on 'Teaching Her a Lesson Pt. 09'

Probably one of the best stories on this site. Good story, good dialogue and good grammar. No massive info-dumping at the start is a big bonus.

Agree to Aug 29th comment. Lots of lesser stories start with a ton of info in starting chapters then slowly dry up. Here there is the right balance of dialogue, scenery and background info plus the creative plot ideas keep coming, often with funny surprises and suspense keeps coming back.