All Comments on 'Teaching My Daughter to Please Ch. 04'

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William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
This series

continues to be one of the best in depicting the delights of deep, dark depravity.

Five star beautifully written pornography.

parputter69parputter69over 11 years ago
Surprise, surprise

Quite a plot twist at the end. Hope this continues on with a longer recap of Jessica's weekend with Sophie and Rachel. The chapters need more detail and length to draw things out and highten the readers interest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome

I love it, great job. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great job

I love the whole story and twist I hope there will be more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
pantiless-in-nyc

"No, Jessica. The whole idea of a skirt is to be bare underneath; to feel the air; to get all hot thinking about being open. And no bra, either."

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Ew mutilation

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can’t wait for chapter 5

webbuyer5134webbuyer5134about 2 years ago

I can't wait for more shaving of head and tail in chapter 5. I think mom should submit? LOL

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