All Comments on 'Teaching Sara Ch. 01'

Looking forward to chapter 2.

Can't wait until the next chapter.

Can't wait for Chapter 2!

Great set for the next chapter!

One of the best!

My boyfriend is really into this fantasy but luckily its just a fantasy. Was a bit hesitant to begin with but this story is amazing.

Exceptionally well written fantasy. Teasing start makes me want to read more by not progressing too quickly to the main action.

Congratulations!

I enjoyed your story quite a bit, but I have to say that the misuse of words like "careening" is distracting (the word you were looking for was craning). I also find it a bit hard to believe that a girl who dresses so provocatively is that innocent and shocked by sex and uses the word "masturbation" rather than "jerking off," but these are just minor quirks of mine, mostly I just enjoyed the story! :)

Wish I could get my wife interested in a roleplay of this variety, hell of any variety :/. Sigh....

like your writing style..

Very descriptive writing, and a story so well told. Wasn't planning on doing any readfing tonight, but now I'm hooked!