All Comments on 'Team Building or Seduction?'

I loved it!

There were a few grammatical errors but not enough to spoil the read. Good luck with finding an editor, when you do you'll be flying.

was she on the pill or getting one in the oven

I was very impressed with your story. Very well written, almost as though it had happened to you. I do not usually read the longer submissions, however I found it engaging right to the end.

I also don't normally read long stories, but your flowed very well! Didn't seem that long. I do think that u have a great talent in writing these stories...keep up the great job.

Looking forward to future stories by u !!!

Oh the temptations of team building

Brilliantly realised

A smooth and highly detailed story that made me ignore the grammatical errors. It was a very intense read for me. Thank you and keep it up.

I don't know if it was your intent to excite your readers' interest - but your story got my cock so hard that I had to masturbate until I shot spurt after spurt of cum all over my computer keyboard. I guess that's in appreciation. Thanks!!!!!!

A long, slow build-up and just the right length. Just the way it should be. And 10/10 for believability

Fantastic, really believable characters and well told

Gr8. Very erotic & beautiful build up. A rarity. First story ever comment on.

Just my type of story...I'm probably going to read it a couple of more times.

Wow! So awesome! Made me twitch! I hope there’s a part 2 (cowgirl so he can suck those boobs then anal), part 3 (add somone else,) and a part 4 (one year later - the meeting after she has the baby)