All Comments on 'Team Bus'

Great story, well written, definitely fired the imagination ;-)

if you are bi like i am, i hope you love pussy but cock just as much. im sure this is part fantasy for you. how i would love to be taken and fucked over and over again by many cocks. i wish i had a cunt for them to enjoy but they could go as often as they wanted, filling my mouth and ass over and over again. after i was fucked thoroughly, i would want to be pushed out of the car here in warm florida, in a bad neighborhood where i would be taken over and over again by big black cocks.

Hi, Just reading your story brought back several bus trips which I had when much younger. All lead to group action as described and the totals were a bit more. One trip involved 39 players & coaches with 2 hitchhikers and another was 22 players, 1 coach & 1 driver with one 19 year old who came with us on the next trip and stayed with us for three days where the only time she sat up was for food, drinks and to suck.

really good times regards

Sexy, dirty (xxx), 'real writing'.

Refreshing English script and extremely erotic.

The sort of tale that should be top of the class at Literotica - A+

Simply 'superb' Patchwork. (did I mention DIRTY....)

xxx. keep them cummminn..

Very sexy....brought back memories of taking on a busload for me, too! Nice, crisp writing...thanks.

I loved this story. I would love to have that many men at my disposal. And i really thought the rugby players were a good choice, my current boyfriend plays rugby and he is the best fuck. I give this an A+++

hot as!!!..

i think it is the hottest one ive read on here so far...good job really...one of my fantasies too...

;)mmm

I guess the story was interesting,

but your still a white cracka! biach! im rick james biach!

Biach!

I would have so loved such a woman after any rugby match. Sod the beer. Just a dream now as time has passed me by, but my lover and I enjoyed a randy time after we read it together. I played with her while she read. Oh to be able to keep up with her. Old age will get you. Fuck while you can.

is dat a record keep it up

That was the hottest story I have EVER read on literotica. Wonderful erotic writing. Great balance of smut and sweet. I absolutely adored it and will be coming back to it for many a wanking.

...can I find that bus? LOL. Great story!

...that was hot as hell. I almost didn't make it to the end before blowing my load! Would loved to have been one of the guys on that bus!

Loved it. I didn't even make it to the end. Part of me wants to be fucked like that!

Great story. Wish I could have been one of the guys also. Keep up the good story telling.

What a delightfully accommodating young lady!! I'm in love!!!