All Comments on 'Tears of the Fallen Ch. 05'

simply beuatiful and you made me cry, thank god caleb is finally pulling his head outta his ass.

I am dying over here!!!!! Did you just stop for Gard to shower?! LOL He needed to stay dirty and get the books. HA!!! I can't wait for this!!!! But seriously, I really like the 3 way nightmare. It puts things into perspective. Callan is about to bust up the joint. Caleb needed for Callan to kick thru his arrogance. I am not sure if I would ever really want to be psychic, that is a lot of stuff to carry around. I can't wait for more of this story. I can feel the depth of love Ana had for her people as well as Callan and Gard. It takes a very strong person to withstand death for a better future. That statement alone makes me think of the bible, but I am not going to get religious. The Queen represents a loving being that wants what is best. Sometimes we do have to lose everything to see that we mindfully have to do better. Great writing, as usual. Thanks for this!! This chapter makes me feel the sadness of love, the pain of love and the hope of love. It also shows how even in discord and separation there is love and a want to reach an understanding. It is the middle of the night and I am getting very cerebral. LOL Your words make us think about more than just the story. Really, you are a gifted writer, and although I said it before, I will say it again. Thanks for this!!!

I hope my Caleb and Callain find a peace and balance within their combined body as I actually like the king and think they are great together and love their conversation. Look forward to the next chapter!

Gosh, u and ur cliffhangers... But, love love love your stories.

Love it! Jaz, Anne Rice have nothing on you. Looking forward to taking this journey!

Great reading you never fail to please and entertain ... love the way you write...

I am really enjoying this story. You have so much talent! Thank you for sharing with us!!!

You are right Jaz. As a writer you can feel when you do a real piece of work. It is indeed one of the best of all chapters which you have ever wrote. I have no words to express the beauty of your work. Beautiful and I can still feel the vibration. Beautiful mind!

Enjoyed this chapter so much. Can't wait for the next chapter.

WOW

Do you remember the first time you heard the Star Spangled Banner and actually understood the ancient words of love and sacrifice? The incredible goose-bumps and the treasured freedom you enjoyed at that time? I sit here weeping as I read of their love and sacrifice. Thank you for writing such a book..

I have no idea why your not published. Your work is amazing, you draw your readers into your world and we are completely captivated! I can't wait to read more, I hope that a publishing house recognizes your work and that you get published soon!

I have fallen in love with all your characters. I appreciate how you develop them, give them all a chance to shine. My biggest disappointment is the fact that I discovered your story to soon as I seem to be forever eagerly awaiting for the next chapter to arrive... I am constantly impressed and devour your chapters as soon as you post them. I loved this one, so much insight given to both Caleb and his altar ego. So I am back to waiting, but take your time, I'll just re read the story from the beginning. Not sure how many times I have done that. Happy writing

Caleb and Annie is talking again! I love your stories and how they flow, there is surprises around every corner but it all fits. I cannot wait to see what's going to happen next :D

POWERFUL!! this has to be the most powerful chapter you have ever written. TO say that I loved it would be an understatement. Thank you for posting it and I can not wait to read more

where you where going after reading the teaser, boy was I wrong. It's almost as if every fork in the road of your story has a new fork in the road, How you come up w/all of the twists and turns and seamlessly weave them all together is beyond me. I'm just happy you have chosen to share the lives of all of your characters w/me. And now I excitedly wait to find out what the ancient tomes might contain and how our "first couple" can get back to that "lov'in feeling"...hehe-he

One of my favorite chapters so far in this series. I have to say that I was feeling a little disappointed for the first few chapters, but this just reaffirmed your greatness. I will never doubt you again Jaz :)

Great chapter and good to see Caleb, Annie and Gard again. One minor point...in this chapter Gard leaves with Rayne before Anakatrine conjures up the illusion Sarayne...but in "The Long Walk Home" Rayne describes seeing the illusion of her in her mothers arms when she is given to Gard. Just thought you may want to fix that if you ever re-write. Call me crazy, but little things like that always jump out at me...And it just shows how well I know your work due to multiple re-reading. :-)

Thank you for your wonderful writing... Thank you for sharing your world with us.

You pull one of these out of the bag every so often when no one's expecting it, and it has seismic consequences! Brilliant :)

F

I have to agree; this is the strongest chapter in TOF so far. Very powerful; I was wondering when Caleb and Annie were going to reappear. Very well done.

It helps explain a lot. Well done.

This chapter was absolutely stunning and very informative. Reading of Anakatrine and Callain's last moments was heartbreaking; they brought tears to my eyes. And the love between those two, as well as the love between Anakatrine and Gard is simply breathtaking. The depth of emotions you give to your characters, the details in which you write, it is so easy lose yourself in their thoughts and feelings. One can so easily imagine themselves right there with the characters: I feel this is an obvious sign, of a truly great author.

Honestly, it's so easy to lose myself in each chapter. I can't wait for the next installment.

Your ever faithful reader,

Cyn

Nothig more to say but that more soon please

the kids are the new normal, and i do think that people (vampire and were alike) are soon to find out what happens when you truly piss them off

more please love your writing and wait with bated breath for the next chapter

Y U WRITE CLIFFHANGER!?

Joking aside, I'm not sure if this is your BEST chapter yet. For me to be a judge of that would require that I read all the chapters you've ever written in rapid succession.

And there's no way I'm doing that, because I wouldn't be able to remember Jack Shit. (Having ADHD really sucks for memory sometimes.)

I do, however, know that the chapter was VERY good. (And I really wish these comments had italics)

pleaase write about pietro soon , let it be only him and his mate next chapter

Again with your cliff hangers!! Amazing, I do think this is one of your best chapters ever but not sure if it takes top I would say maybe a tie for it. I'm so happy that things are starting to look up for one of my favorite couples. :D

I don't think I have cried so much in one chapter of any author on here..btw to me the more i cry and feel for the characters the more i like the story because I can relate and it makes it more realistic to me.....the agony of watching your people and your soulmate die and knowing there is nothing you can do to stop it...omg....poor thing.

.loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter

Yaaaaaaaaaay! Bring forth Cullain my Lady! I can almost forgive Caleb for being such an idiotic dick because Cullain is coming!!! Yessssssssssssssssss!!! The tomes! The tomes! Ahhhhhhhhhh glorious chapter!

Absolutely brilliant, please write quickly!

Years of reading this world and you accomplished something rare. You made the original characters relevant again. Not only that you added dimensions to Annie, Caleb, and Gard; three characters we thought we knew well. I don't get on the site as much as in the old days but I'm still a fan and with every chapter you remind my why.

Peace and joy,

Your long time fan

Shell

Great read... Was worth the wait....Now that it is over, I dread the falling of the other shoe....Please post faster ...Please...Please

See what a dick he is!!! His awfulness and arrogance is even more highlighted and magnified when he feels utterly alone, reaches out to Annie and she is there for him instantly! Now THAT's truly unconditional love! Enter Cullain!

You are a bitter woman

If you ever want to talk, let me know!!!

O.M.F.G I admit I am INSANE when it comes to these Jaz Cullen stories!!! No apologies about thinking Caleb is a dick though! LOL hahahahahaha!

I like that Caleb was finally taken down a few notches. Go Callain!! It was the perfect representation of what has to happen to the arrogance that has developed within their people. It's awe inspiring to watch you consistently weave these elements so easily. Thank you.

Just when Im dying to know whats happening to the others you bring me back to demetri. Keep up the good work. I find myself stalking your page over and over again to catch a new story. More Kothi!!!!!!!

To describe about how I feel about this chapter... Maybe "I didn't want it to end", is the only one... but I always feel that way about your stories. You really should be published. I want physical evidence of this stuff should they ever disappear! D: I re-read your stories when I am waiting for a new chapter. Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting to read what else you're bringing our way.

each chapter better than the last. I love your stories and can hardly wait for the next submission.

I'm constantly checking your page for new chapters and constantly amazed at each new one. I would love to see you published and hope you keep the stories comming! If it would not offend, I would ask that you write more about Kothari (jr). May God bless you in this life and the next!

Ur truly an amazing writer! I cannot wait 4 u 2 b publishd! Please!!!!!! Don't keep us waiting much longer!!!!!

Jaz you continue to amaze me with each chapter you write. I have really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next one. You continually improve and just make each new chapter exciting and wonderful to read. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing yours stories with us.

I just love all that detail. All that history. I think the nightmares were an excellent way to reveal the past to us. The easiest and most interesting way. Bravo.

What an emotional dynamic chapter. You caught my attention at the very beginning of this series. I don't always like how the chapters end because I can't wait for the next but your storyline always evolves and continues to pull me in. Thank you for sharing.

You are so very talented! Keep it up.

Brilliant!!!

Every time 5 out of 5 xx

Just beautiful.

Looking forward to the next one. You are such an incredible author!!!

I agree this the best!

Sooooooo good! I'm not going to be able to wait for the next chapter!

That was a great cliff hanger! Can't wait to see what those books have in them!

Loved the flashback the best!

thanks for sharing it, really nice. i loved reading it

This is your fav! So many holes answered behind the mysteries of their pasts! It ties so much together and gives strength to an already growing platform giving way to the next measure of this masterpiece! Sorry so wordy but, truly i am swept away with emotion.

I can't wait for the next chapter x

It's no wonder it's one of your favorite! I read it twice!

Absolutely Magnificent !!!

One of the best chapters yet!

You've reduced a 43 year old man to a sobbing mess. Great chapter!!!

This is vintage Jazz!!!!!!!!

I saw this when you posted it. But I did not read it till today because I was afraid. Afraid that I would learn that characters that I love wil be damaged and can't be helped. But i should not have worried, because it was Jaz writing them. And what Jaz writes is brilliant.

Love love love this chapter!! Hurry please with the next!

I think that sums it up!

Amazing:) I love this saga but I am not the most patient of people. It drives me to distraction when I get to a part of the story where I need to keep going but the rest of the damn pages are blank. It's a little like that agonizing dream full of blind terror mixed with frustration, all you can do is wait it out and hope for the best. Hopefully the wait won't be long.

~Sarabell

YES!!, I have been waiting to find out what was going on with Annie and Caleb. I love the back story, and I cant wait to see where you are going with the books.. I am so excited....LOL. I cant wait to see what else you have coming. Try not to take too long, the suspense is killing me hahahaha.

Great chapter.

As usual jaz this was Incredible!

I am totally amazed at how wonderful your writing is! Great work looking forward to the next one!

Thank you for joining some dots. That was a wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the next.

THERE IS NOTHING ELSE TO SAY BUT NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE.

Jazz you are amazing.

Please the next chapter should be about kothari and dara. Or elina and karn. I seriously thinks about them all day..hehe....or may be about there first kiss...*blush*

Waiting for next chapter!!!!!

I HAVE NEVER FELT SO EMOTIONAL AS WHEN I READ YOUR STORIES. IF YOU'RE PUBLISHED PLEASE LET ME KNOW

this story has been boring so far...ur earlier stories were much better..specially long walk home

Excellent chapter, thanks for sharing this story.

That was the best chapter you've written of the entire series.

So glad Caleb has come to his senses.

Oh my Goodness Hurry with the next Chapter ! Lol What is in those books? Cool chapter going back in time. So happy Caleb is coming around ! Love your writing. Ugh .......... :/ waiting impassionately.

I was hoping the seceret was a baby. But secret Tomes is pretty cool. Still if her mother had kids, I wonder. Maybe not. She's really juswt a vessel for the spirit of the quees as is Caleb.

Another wonderful chapter with your cliffhanger ending. I have no nails reading your stories :-) Can't wait for the next installment.

Okay. I'm ready for chapter 6 now!!!!!

Glad Annie and Caleb are back on the same page. Interested in seeing how all the stories will come together, as right now, they're reading like excerpts from different books.

I'm sure you have a plan and I'm looking forward to seeing how the pieces fall into place.

Beautiful. Thank you so much for continuing the story, I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Was glad to see a bit of the vampire king's character. He would have had to be strong to constantly argue with Gard about how to protect Anakatrine, but up until now, that was all we knew. I am glad to see his absence explained. Explaining the past also gives us more understanding of Caleb's decisions in this life.. Thank you.

Magic, pure and simple MAGIC. There is a reason you fell in love with this chapter, it was fucking brilliant! It covered three millennia, tied up several loose ends, and still leaves us on the edge of another cliff. My finger tips are bloody, however I am still hanging on!!!! OMG. Doctime

I had to return and re-read this chapter. It is still brilliant, HOWEVER, you have just raised the bar for your self. Good luck, I am rooting for you. Your skill makes me smile! XD

I have read all your stories and love them all, hoping for chapter 6 soon so we can all get our fix. Have to say I am looking forward to Kallum's Story :)

LOVE your stories but when the bloody heck are you going to write more?????

Its like reading Laurell Hamilton's: Ainta Blake series, Lindsay Sands Vampire intertwining series & Keri Arthur's Riley Jenson all wrapped in one just about.

It's time for a new chapter. I feel like I have to wait a month for each new addition. The suspense is eating away at my patience.

Jaz, honey this is the best piece of writing I have ever had the privilege to read. My only question is; when will you compile and make available in an ebook.. humm? You are the best in your genre and it is time.

That was a few cuts above the rest!

Your writing has always been excellent. I have lived all your stories, but your little world just burst my mind open today!

Do let me know when u publish!

love the story! would be interested in finding out more about the individual vercolak and seeing where their story develops! Also would be great to find out why Reasa considers them to be abominations...please post next chapters soon! :)

Pretty please!?!?! I'm checking your submissions every day hoping to read the following chapters...going nuts here!

To put forth a statement that you are the best in the nonhuman section; well that goes without saying. For years, you’ve been the most popular author, and rightly deserved. I think this chapter puts you beyond that. In my humble opinion, I think you FAR outshine any author on this site; and there’s a lot of us. The ability to draw the reader into the story so they lose track of reality, now that’s a true gift, a gift you prove over and over with each chapter. Why you are not on the New York Times best seller’s list, hmmm, I guess it takes others a bit longer to figure out what we already know…you’re the best there is.

Wheres the next one!? can't wait till it come out...Plz post soon? It's been nearly a month......so plz stop holdin back on us...An 100% agreeing with Gweneth and Bonearms....soooo...I'll keep checkin back...and dont let me make you feel rushed (okay, maybe a little) But take your time to write another beautiful piece!

I have been following your writings over the past year and you are truly talented not many can hold my interest. I cant wait for more to come. im on the edge of my seat never wanting them to end.:)

Guess the author has decided to lower his maturity level to that of a 5-year-old for her own personal amusement.

This is most definitely one of the best chapters you have ever written...

This chapter gave hope but I'm much too impatient to see hope without action. On to the next chapter! :-)