Tears of the Fallen Ch. 23

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GONE!!

THEY ARE GONE!!

Deep scores lined the page, the words carved into the paper. But it wasn't that which made her throw up...no that was bad enough, but it wasn't that which had turned her blood to ice. It was the very last entry, written so neatly and precisely...

Dear Kothari...

I'm here

A

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The End...for now

To be continued in Storm of Shadows

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BigotedeFocaBigotedeFoca2 months ago

Jesus Christ ! I am so hooked.

Irenae21Irenae2111 months ago

So many travels later and I still miss kothari so much. I hope he and Agony have become one now and are coexisting well

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
excellent

excellent excellent excellent excellent ...

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26over 5 years ago
Anonymous check on Amazon

Jaz's biography has more information if you'd like to follow.

I agree this series is amazing!

I hope to some day see it as a movie saga. Would be better and probably top TLOR.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Powerful, thrilling and mesmerizing...

...this is my 4th time reading it. I just wish it could be made into a movie series like Underworld....but yours is far more interesting....Hope you will continue expanding these different series into different directions... If you ever get them published in books, I'd be one of the first to buy. Thank you.

realusmctazmanrealusmctazmanover 5 years ago
EFFIN AMAZING

This series rocks! You freaking rock!

A_StoneA_Stoneover 6 years ago
When this series becomes published...

I want a signed copy! I’m late in the game and wish I started following you all those years ago, but I’m glad I came upon it! I find myself thinking of your characters and imagining what will happen to them. I love each and every one of them and Im DYING to hear Kothari’s story! It’s going to be EPIC!!!

I remember a comment back when Demetri and Rafe killed Richard Graves that said that they missed seeing the vamps go dark side. I love it when they do it too and can’t wait to see the carnage that will rain down upon the European covens *hehehe*

I think one of my favorite quotes can be applied nicely here...

“Tell them they can either live in my world, or die in theirs” -Khaleesi

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing!

Read this story several times, and still love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
2nd time reading this series

I started with FTI and just finished Tears. This is the best writer I have read in a lot of years. Seriously, go to Amazon, get the 1st book, read the entire series a couple of times. There were little things that I missed the first time thru.

Thank you Jaz... you have spent a lot of time and energy entertaining all of us for years. I wish you a huge success with this series when it all comes out in print. I know I will be buying this!

j76475j76475over 7 years ago
Great Storry

I found this late but just finished this part. Keep it up. Trying to read each section as I find them.

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