by theredheadboy
I don't think you're done here; for my part, I wasn't ready for this to be over. I love your more loving stories very much, don't misunderstand me; but when I've had a harder week, and particularly a week where I've felt really pissed off by men, a story like this helps relieve a little tension and frustration for me. I'd like to see more of how she ensures her boy stays well behaved.
He stood up and beat the crap out of her and walked out, never to return. What did you think would happen? That he would accept being tortured? How is that in any way erotic, sexy or interesting? It's not! Terrible story.
Ignore the idiot anonymous contributor. Only someone who's been a subbie would know and appreciate the tension and expectation in this "unfair" game. Thanks for a great tale and reminder of how much fun power play can be, and how seriously connecting submission is.
..and Anonymous is right, this is poor stuff. It would only be a "game" if the sub had a choice about whether or not to be fucked, and so a choice about whether or not to have the forbidden extra orgasm. As it is, it's just torture.
Very good! I hope there is a continuation of this story. So hot. I wish I was the boy being dominated by her!