by maemae961
My bff and i shave each other and it always leads to a lot of fun. What are best friends for if not to help each other out?
The only thing I didn't like about this story was that it ended. I was hoping for a few more pages. Incredible experience erotic story. Loved it!!
Not the best writing and, as has been mentioned, inexcusably lax editing. A potentially interesting story ruined by sloppiness and a non-ending ending.
"why don't we lay down a towel and you can lay down"
"why don't we lay down a towel and you can lie down" would be correct
I really liked this story, the pace and characters were great. Hope there is more to come.
I hope this is just the start, this would make a good serious I hope you keep this story going