by inkyscandal
Seems like a missed opportunity to have Alex make her cum on the bike. Maybe not publicly but once they get back. Definitely spun my own fantasy off that.
Quote: "I can't afford to blow my summer like this. It'd be even worse than last year." Unquote.
Will we learn what happend last year?
Curious
These 4 chapters are extraordinary. I am not in a hurry you begin the "please" part, because the "tease" part is amongst the best stories I have read.
Wonderful work. Dont rush to get Elise fully naked, for me the tease is this series real appeal. Keep writing more!
What happened to no visible underwear?
She should be showing her genitals :-)
Maybe working fully nude soon?
I look for each new chapter in anticipation of what's going to unfold next.
Thanks for sharing....
RecHiker
You are creating something special..keep up the good work. your story is a great example of how to write a great erotic story without in-your-face sex and nudity! It is much more effective when its subtle!
Please keep up the good work. Love the descriptions of the outfits.
The character development is great. The lack of knowledge about Dr. Yamamoto works great for the story - and allows flexibility in the plot.
Glad that you are steering away from sex (at least for now) - there is too much of that on the net already. Unique stuff like this is a rare treasure.