All Comments on 'Tease Tortured By 4 Older Women'

by Punishme62

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Bambi_DoeBambi_Doeabout 11 years ago

I thought I would atleast get a good laugh from this story. This 19 so desperate he fucks 4 old bitches. You could've atleast threw in a young sister or cousin. But as soon as I read they drugged him I stopped reading. Its gross that they are old as fuck forcing & drugging this young boy. Especially since he's family that's just disgusting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wawot

Sorry author but I could not even force myself to read more than half of the first page of this story . It was terrible . There is no story to me worth reading when drugs are used and the women are nuts . No there not nuts . There fucking crazy .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Chapter 2 : not forever

They can't keep him there forever. Let him get free, put sleeping pills in their drinks, tie them up an put them next to each other on a bed, fuck one after the other including his mother while spanking them and slap their bottoms, cunts and tits with leather straps as their punishment, force them to give their codes to their bankaccounts, take the money and then tell them bitches to have a nice life. And off he rode.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Interesting story

a little far out but some good ideas. Many young men who indulge in rude behavior need proper training from older woman.

BarbaraBarbaraabout 11 years ago
Sickeningly absorbing 'Clockwork Orange' like vision of sadistic 'Mistress' punishments. Voted 4+ for verbal imagination, however.

Pity absent, older feminist relatives trained Billy to accept CBT activity, in return for foul scent appreciations.God forbid; Billy's lessons could psychologically castrate a healthy sex-drive permanently, if Author's concepts based [even partially] on feminist reality!

rdoolittlerdoolittleabout 11 years ago
Ready for more

The smell thing is not a fetish of mine, but having 4 women in charge is it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Can't wait for chapter 2

Gave it a 5........only because I couldn't give it a 6 or 7.

I thought it was incredible and you did a fantastic job in all of the details. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
FUN

Oh how I woould love to be abused like that. I dream about women using me and abusing me making me service them in any way they wish. I would love to have several women make eat them out and when not licking their pussies and ass holes made to smell and chew on their dirty panties. I would love to lick a women who has not wiped or washed for days the smell and taste would be heave GREAT STORY

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
WOW

I love this story.... I have never wanted to be a fictional character in a story more than I did after reading this. A good long teasing beyond my endurance has always been a fantasy of mine. Keep up the awesome work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
shit

Well what will they do when they find poor punished Billy has hung himself from the closet rail. Where is the fun now????

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WRITE MORE,, PLEASE!

PLEASE, WRITE MORE! I absolutely LOVE this story.

Brandon11Brandon11almost 5 years ago
Tease

It’s sad that you didn’t let this come to an end and him leave his so called family or have some kind of retribution since there was obviously no love for him from this family.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Sick

No mother or grandmother would do this. Your sick

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
awesome story

This was an amazing work of fantasy...I wish there was more to it...its a shame you stopped writing.

Shane279Shane279over 1 year ago

Don't mind femdom especially with family but torture for the sake of torture with no love or emotional care for the victim belongs in the fetish category rather then incest/taboo.

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