All Comments on 'Teased in the Tub'

by CalypsoInPhilly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
NOICE.

I really enjoyed reading that. Especially the ending, showing that he did it for her. :)

FASfanFASfanover 7 years ago
Great story, well told

Thank you for sharing it with us. Five stars.

UnicornInPhillyUnicornInPhillyover 7 years ago
Oh! That was Hot!

Great scene, very descriptive writing. I bet he would do anything for her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Yu create the most unusual scenerios. Very well written. Describes the emotions and responses to stimulation

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The ending

This was a perfect story that you could usually find anywhere but the ending made it unique. The ending made it more real, more sensual and less emotionless. Great job!

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