by CalypsoInPhilly
I really enjoyed reading that. Especially the ending, showing that he did it for her. :)
Great scene, very descriptive writing. I bet he would do anything for her.
Yu create the most unusual scenerios. Very well written. Describes the emotions and responses to stimulation
This was a perfect story that you could usually find anywhere but the ending made it unique. The ending made it more real, more sensual and less emotionless. Great job!