by msgrant67
Great story, sensual, different, and fun!
Good job!
thank you!
Quite a few sisters are very competitive. It can often work to a guys advantage .
Clever story well written with an excellent surprise ending.
Thanks
A bit too contrived, but a lovely surprise ending!
Does she go on to fuck him?
You need to continue writing more and more ;)
She need her release too ;)
He never stood a chance against your sexual prowess!!
I loved it!! Can't wait for More
I think she should have "suggested" that Jason pull his own shorts down if he wanted the handjob...... that way he would have Sealed his own Fate, which Wood have pleased Melanie even more than doing all the work herself......
She would say to her sister, "This one time I was rubbing this guy's leg and he pulled his shorts down without saying a word. I guess he really wanted me to continue pleasuring him" :-)
Your stories all involve some daring, calculated risk. They characters come across as creative, competitive and fun.
But 5 stars all the way!! Great twist at the end!! This needs another chapter!!!
amazing story!
minor detail, but i love the stuff Melanie says to undermine her sister at the beginning