All Comments on 'Teasing Sister's Boyfriend'

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 10 years ago
Well done!

Great story, sensual, different, and fun!

Good job!

thank you!

jaguronjaguronabout 10 years ago
great story

excellent story, very fun.

fafhrd09fafhrd09about 10 years ago
Love he ending

Such a mean ending! I laughed a lot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Fun story

Quite a few sisters are very competitive. It can often work to a guys advantage .

arrowglassarrowglassabout 10 years ago
enjoyed the end.......

Enjoyed the end...hope it is NOT the end!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Successful story

Very well written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

IM SO FUCKING HARD RIGHT NOW, I NEED TO KNOW WHATS NEXT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
fuckin' great!!!!

what a hard on inspiring story!!! I want more!!!

bozorinobozorinoabout 10 years ago
Very Clever!

Clever story well written with an excellent surprise ending.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Excellent

A bit too contrived, but a lovely surprise ending!

Does she go on to fuck him?

rombo034rombo034almost 10 years ago

Well written and well built.

It needs a sequel though ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More

You need to continue writing more and more ;)

She need her release too ;)

JohnnieBoxxJohnnieBoxxover 9 years ago
that poor boy.......

He never stood a chance against your sexual prowess!!

I loved it!! Can't wait for More

JohnnieBoxxJohnnieBoxxover 9 years ago
That "poor" boy.......

I think she should have "suggested" that Jason pull his own shorts down if he wanted the handjob...... that way he would have Sealed his own Fate, which Wood have pleased Melanie even more than doing all the work herself......

She would say to her sister, "This one time I was rubbing this guy's leg and he pulled his shorts down without saying a word. I guess he really wanted me to continue pleasuring him" :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice Job

Your stories all involve some daring, calculated risk. They characters come across as creative, competitive and fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sinister!

But 5 stars all the way!! Great twist at the end!! This needs another chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

amazing story!

minor detail, but i love the stuff Melanie says to undermine her sister at the beginning

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