All Comments on 'Technically Not a Story'

A story with no conflict is boring.

Agreed! A story with no conflict is a series of sequential details. Not a story at all.

The first story, or non-story, I've read that I felt compelled to leave a comment. This site provides workshopping. It's helped me. Please consider it as you bring some good ideas to the table. The end result however is senseless willful profanity overlaid on fourth-grade storytelling. You can learn so good luck.

I didn't find it boring at all, I have gone back to this story several times to attempt to write a non sexual and minimalistically supernatural story without conflict. Of course the problem is the very thing that engages the reader is the pornographic nature of the content. But still, I have treated it like a writing excercise for myself and enjoyed it tremendously. This story alone got be back into writing for the first time in over ten years. Thanks!

I'm glad it did something for you. This is definitely a really stupid story, but I think some of the readers have missed the "satire" tag. This is much more meant to lampoon some of the silly stories I see here and elsewhere with a bunch of eroticism with no purpose or direction. Either way, not representative of my work, so folks can love or hate as they like. :)

Amazing story , really ! i know some people might not like it , but male dom like this is what floats my boat , so there. Thanks for writing it .