All Comments on 'Ted's Condition - an Origin Story'

This is a really nice story, a great idea and well thought out but there are so many spelling errors it made me stop a few times to see what you were trying to say. I would love to see more chapters, including more detail of the woman's point of view rather than sheer amazement at the size as well as what he's feeling as well. I sincerely hope you will add more.

Not bad story, good theme. But your jumping from first to third person (I was-Ted was) is quite annoying.

To both your story and writing in general.

I'd be interested to read more chapters of this. The doctor was particularly hot and the scene in the shower was awesome.