All Comments on 'Teen Swimmin' Dream'

This was so good must continue please!!

do we get a part two. story seems unfinished. no open declaration of love and or if they come out to some people as a couple.

The first half is exactly like my own love story!

Hope u continue.

sensual, warm and full of smiles - what more can you ask of a story?!

please write more - you have a way to bring characters to life!

Very well written! Looking forward to your next story!

Style and grace.

Very well done. Looking forward to more

This story made me feel like I was with the characters, and I wish I was. Look forward to new stories from you!

Excellent story!

For a while now I have been back & forth on what to do with this story. Thank all you readers for making my time (and my editors' time) worth it. I am no longer afraid to post my thoughts for the world to see.

Stay tuned for the next episode. ;)

Beautifuly written

That was extremely well written, for awhile now I've been trying to find a good story and this one was great, please make a part two, and could you post a comment telling weather you will make a part two or not? Because if you don't I'll be checking everyday for one, and I'd like to know soon if you will, again great job don't stop

. . . and that shouldn't be taken as a small compliment. I bought this 100%. Well done! It's romantic and credible. Would love to read the next installment

A beautifully done story, with convincing characters, well-written dialogue and some extremely hot sex. Part Two is definitely called for -- our heroine has to get a chance to return the favor, doesn't she?

Can't wait for the next installment!

i hope it'll b a love story more than a sex story...

I really hope that's forshadowing a sequal to this story. Wonderful read and thank you so much for sharing!

A very enjoyable story.

Hopefully there is more parts to come where their relationship blossoms.

I'd love to see a sequel to this. No guys though please! Excellent story you wrote here. I'd expect lots of other readers like myself to demand more. I think I actually enjoyed the story more than the sex and that is a compliment. I really want to know more about these girls.

Incredible story, so very well written.

I never post comments, but this was well worth it. I second the other comment, hopefully there'll be a love story here.

Here's what you guys haven't mentioned yet in the comments: this is Kriss's first frickin' posting! And it's THIS good? I think we're all in for quite a ride, compliments of Ms. Krossed. Go, girlie, go!

I dont usualy comment but had to for this one. It's brilliant and like others have said I'd like to see a sequel :)

No mater what anyone else says, DO NOT STOP THIS STORY! Write more PLEASE!

I think u need to write more of this story . Once a week write what happened at the next swim meet. In the showers or on the bus at one of there homes or an after meet party. This is an incredible story and i know all of us on here will really like more .

would love to read more of what happens between Andrea and Katrina

Loved it - well written, romantic and sexy. Please continue it, soon.

this was really engaging! thank you so much for writing it!

Is there ever gonna be a part two? I hope so this part was great, please make it happen

i really enjoyed that

What a wonderful awakening Katrina had. It was also a wonderful escape from her domestic situation. Her experience is all the more enjoyable as it was so unexpected & Andrea so wanted Katrins. I would like to know how their relationship develops!!!

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site. You're a terrific writer. Please write more!

It was so wonderfully realistic in its depiction of two very different but beautiful (girls? women?).

Just looked at the post date, June 2013. Feel let down that no more perfect stories are to come.