by Ksennin
Great sex, great dialogue. The last part seemed a bit rushed, but otherwise great. (I assume there's a version out there somewhere where we find out how Kory made her new doggy friend.) Dug up the original for comparison, and now I'm wondering if you ever did anything with issues #23-25. Seems like there's potential there.
While issues 23-25 were not adapted directly, they are referenced in SLAVEGIRL OF TAMARAN, THE SEQUEL, which can be found elsewhere.
So well written and fun that it would make a great comic even if it weren't for the sex. Also, the sex is great! Well done, all around.