All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 16'

Absolutely fantastic!

So glad you are back and continuing with the story - keep up the good work!

Nice recovery from the last chapter. I knew today was going to be a good day.

I am so please you didn't abandon this story. There is so much to tell. I am interested in the aftermath with the life he just bailed on. Totally agree with his decision to do so but am wondering what Theresa is going to do to cover it up? Keep at it. :)

Chapters like this are worth the wait. Thank you for continuing this well-crafted story. I don't want to wait for more, but know the wait will be justified. Lots of open threads to follow and close, so looking forward to many more chapters. :)

I was really liking the story but now there doesn't really seem to be a story anymore. There are some great sex scenes but the progress seems slow to me. I like the story and when he found out about what they did I was excited to see what he would do and then he went to Vegas.

I'm not bashing the story in anyway, in truth I like it, I just hoped he would have done something more than just left.