by fire_breeze
intimacy, desire and humour...
lovely use of language and love Breezy-you just get better and better-this short format really suits your style xx
It was a pleasant treat to read this short interchange between lovers and the openness they showed and shared. It kept me smiling as I thought of the times my own scrumptious Lady has done the driving and her initial reluctance to do so. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Keep it up!
I love how you transition so easily from hot, steamy sex to sweet tender love.. The last few lines proves this couple's incredibly deep love for each other. Another wonderful story!
This is wonderfully written! I really liked how you went from unrestrained passion to quiet tenderness, it was very smooth and easy to follow. I especially like this because it reminds me of my relationship with my boyfriend; even though we've never had sex (with each other or anyone else) I feel like this will be exactly what happens after he and I are married. Great read, keep it up! =)