All Comments on 'Tell Me'

by fire_breeze

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
janeyljaneylalmost 13 years ago
Full of...

intimacy, desire and humour...

lovely use of language and love Breezy-you just get better and better-this short format really suits your style xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Warm and Real!

It was a pleasant treat to read this short interchange between lovers and the openness they showed and shared. It kept me smiling as I thought of the times my own scrumptious Lady has done the driving and her initial reluctance to do so. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice!!

I love how you transition so easily from hot, steamy sex to sweet tender love.. The last few lines proves this couple's incredibly deep love for each other. Another wonderful story!

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 11 years ago
Quite lovely.

Thank you.

EmC13EmC13over 10 years ago
Excellent

This is wonderfully written! I really liked how you went from unrestrained passion to quiet tenderness, it was very smooth and easy to follow. I especially like this because it reminds me of my relationship with my boyfriend; even though we've never had sex (with each other or anyone else) I feel like this will be exactly what happens after he and I are married. Great read, keep it up! =)

Zach_lost_in_AusZach_lost_in_Ausover 9 years ago
Beautiful

Love and lust, simply but beautifully rendered.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Love it

Very glad i clicked on this story! Cute- relatable- sexy

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous