All Comments on 'Tell Me what You were Thinking Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

fag cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
OMG

Jesus, that was horrible. As an experiment in writing style you earn a bit ZERO. ee cummings you are not. Bad story + unreadable = No need to try again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
....

Oh Long Johnson!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow, now that's some closet fag shit.

Come on out sweetie. I guarantee you the boys will love some new hole to fill.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
sorry...

the subject is not bad at all,

but

the

single

word

carriage

returns

are

entirely

distracting.

Please STOP! Let the story set the pace, not the type.

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