All Comments on 'Tell Me You Love Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hey I do like this

from my side ... It seems to be so real of a moment in the life of these two people. The movement of the story. a solid 5

fewellafewellaalmost 6 years ago
"I love you!"

So twisted!! To say I love you during sex and not mean it. But it does happen and that's what makes this a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Right category for him, wrong for her...

as to her it's clearly just an erotic coupling!

boatbummboatbummalmost 6 years ago
Love The One You're With....

FWB ain't all that bad, especially when the sex is great! I've fallen in lust many times through the years, and even in love a few times.... ;-)

Cute little vignette, thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Excellent

I LOVED this. Reminds my of how I met the woman who's now my wife. 34 yrs ago. That initial feeling of attraction. The kinda akwardness of the first time sex but the closeness after. The sex isnt as intense now but just as satisfying but different. Outfuckingstanding young lady.

3 stars

DragonRider55 Ret USAF

OvercriticalOvercriticalalmost 6 years ago
What?

I don't know what the other commentors saw that I missed. It was a page of boy meets girl, they date a while and then then have sex. They lie about love and have an orgasm. And then it stops. It doesn't end, it stops. 2* is generous

anonymousinblueanonymousinbluealmost 6 years ago
category nazi

It was not too bad for an erotic coupling. It was sort of funny to see her play the part of lying to get into somebody's pants, although here it's after; I don't think it's respectable either way. There will be consequences, no doubt.

She might realize something in her, although I doubt it and the universe will soak up the blood of a broken heart, and sweep up the remains of yet another fragile male ego. Although such innocence seems a bit contrived and would be more congruent with somebody that has an intellectual disability, which was not hinted at.

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