All Comments on 'Temporary Girlfriend: Wedding Ch. 01'

You're still on the mark.

Absolutely have loved this series from you as well as your other submissions. You have intersting dialogue and bring the story from different angles well. Please continue this series as I apparantly am not the only one who reads and loves your stories.

That was another great chapter in the series. I like how you brought Megan, Josh and Fiona together to set up the wedding series. I like how he also brought Alexis and Jeremy into the same chapter about doing the second book. Keep up the good work.

Mark

The plane crash is getting old, fast. Cessna should sue you for defamation of product. 3 strikes and you are out. Your writing is good, if incredibly repetitious. Clean up the typos. you are no rookie.