All Comments on 'Temporary Home'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice Story!

The story is well-written and gradually gathers momentum. The humour's clean and real. I like the way it ends.

I hope you will continue to write more of such romance-sex stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Terrific....

a wonderfully written tale, laced with all the elements of well told stories! Extremely well done...

sandman28036sandman28036over 14 years ago
Nice

Great story. Very good twist ending, had me thinking it was the older woman for a minute but it wasn't.

cindylynn34cindylynn34over 9 years ago
good job

wonnderful ending

Rickman48Rickman48about 7 years ago
This was fun!

Great read! I enjoyed this one a lot!

DwarfLord50DwarfLord508 months ago

Great fun to read. It always amazes me how reading a story from this perspective comes across as a sweet story, but then reading it from the husband's perspective makes it seem so different. Anyway, I really enjoyed this.

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