by thornapple
The story is well-written and gradually gathers momentum. The humour's clean and real. I like the way it ends.
I hope you will continue to write more of such romance-sex stories.
a wonderfully written tale, laced with all the elements of well told stories! Extremely well done...
Great story. Very good twist ending, had me thinking it was the older woman for a minute but it wasn't.
Great fun to read. It always amazes me how reading a story from this perspective comes across as a sweet story, but then reading it from the husband's perspective makes it seem so different. Anyway, I really enjoyed this.