by jill_gates
Great read, I agree that more is better! Really want to see more of your work
I thought it was very good and think u should make more (th author should make more) cuz their a master at these kinda stories I give it 5 stars
she's into a committed relationship and cheats on her mate, no matter the sex of all parties. It's interesting that no-one picked up on that...
Opening such a private area to someone else to caress and kiss and fuck deeply is the ultimate surrender. Nothing feels quite like it. Except maybe returning the gift. Thank you for this story. Please write more!
I wanted to like it but there was no build up - no seduction. The moment Erin reveals her Lesbian thoughts going on for years - the sex becomes inevitable. Resistance - creates tension which creates sexual build up.