All Comments on 'Temporum - The Open One Ch. 01'

Hi there,

just love your new story, I hope its going to contain many chapters.

from your old beta reader simonjessex@hotmail.com

Something new, unlike anything I've read before. Looking forward to seeing this story develop - how and when Lyre accepts who he is, how difficult his training will be, whether Traci will be his one and only trainer, why the demon specifically targeted Lyre (or was it a random act of targeting any human) and of course, if the narrator finally passes.

This is a different story but still a good one. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Welcome back to writing such good stories. Thanks for coming up with interesting and wild stories that make me want to read more and more.

ACLASSYLADY

PS I am looking to read much of the same kind of story from you...(one that brings my imagination reeling. I am glad you are doing a new story.)