All Comments on 'Temptation Ch. 04'

A beautifully drawn out story line. But, then it turns into pounding, gasping sex. Looking at your photo, picturing what your son might look like and how he would love to make his prim, proper mother take his cock and enjoy the sex. Made my cock hard and need to be stroked til I shot my load into his beautiful mother as well. A loving mother, church lady turning into a cum slut for her son. The need for a quickly recovering young cock and the feel of him shooting off deep inside his own mother's cunt. Lovely. There must be more fucking, sucking and cumming they want to do.

To read more from you,very erotic the other chapters need to be read before this ,its as I imagine incest would be.

Give us a clue,the time interval between chapters suggests the former,whatever its very erotic and also very true to life.

The story had a rapid death for my reading with the frequent and over use of ...; only read less than half the first page and had severe eye strain. Remove 99.999% of this item and improve your story. Appears you've got an extreme love affair with ... as you can't hardly go but a couple lines with using it.

I sense a gradual climb towards an explosive ending. A chapter or two more where mother becomes a mother again. More please.

It's for some reason the most erotic thing when a woman writes about sex with her son(s). My best guess is that in reality only hard up moms that can't get dates make moves towards their sons. But then what do I know?

I wonder if there really are attractive moms out there that have fulfilling sexual relationships with their sons? It's erotic to think so!

This story as it unfolds makes me ask the question is this real or fiction.

The passions seems so real, this is well written and carries the reader on an emtional roller coaster.

This erotic to the extreme and the author deserves credit.

Once again your story is so real and exciting, you have the ability to bring out the burning love only possible between a mother and her son. I can only imagine where this may lead with the father-in-law knowing the happenings and bidding his time till the time is right to seduce his beautiful sexy daughter-in-law. Please keep up the beautiful work and I long for reading the next chapter as you always have me so hard when I finish reading your stories.

I guess my thermometer just exploded reading this serie. 100 is not fair enough! Amazing story, great build up and very well written!

This story truly provides an outlet for those like myself that have a fetish for such things. We are readers and amateur writers; for those so critical, try writing nearly as good as this story: I challenge you on this.

From your friend: CestisBest

Thank you Christine for making such a sizzling hot and sexy story. I havent let myself go into a story like that in a long time. I hope there is more to it later on because I will keep coming back for more.

Wonderful. Truly shows raw passion.

....for submitting your fantasies (or experiences) in such a well written and explosive manner. The mother in the story is certainly complex, like most of us. Outwardly appearing composed and pure, inwardly succumbing to extreme temptations. Your stories continue to capture the essence of the struggle many of us feel...the inner spark that's quenched only by the taboo (in whatever form that may take). Terrific job and thanks again Christine. (Russ)

Oh Christine, Christine. Like your character, you try so hard to be prim and proper, but cannot resist your secret urges. The ambivalence is reflected in your writing, as when you are trying so hard to behave you say "derriere" and "tush", but down-and-dirty "ass" and "asshole" when you give in. Intentional or not, your readers really feel your emotions. And, the picture on your bio page is perfect ... discreet, yet so sensual. Thank you!

Aaah this story seriously needs a chapter 5. It is too good to end at ch 4.

well written and very enjoyable from beginning to end - just shows what a woman will do to satisfy her lust.

Truly Sexy, Hot and Wonderful. What passion!!!!!

Thank you Christine, for making your fantasy or experience a story that is so well written,explicit and not vulgar, that I relived my long time fantasy of my Aunt with you. I havent let myself go like that in a long time. I will continue to look for more of your stories. Are there other sites that you have written others on?

Sincerely,

Lee /

lehunter74u@hotmail.com

I have no idea how I happened to read your story. I am most happy that I did. This was probably one of the best mother/son incest stories I have every read. You have a unique ability to tell a story and make the reader feel what the characters are feeling. Made me feel I needed to help them conceal their tryst and to help themfrom being found out. You are an excellent writer, I need say no more.

"Never Give Up"

MOM SHOULD HAVE TAKEN A FULL FACIAL FROM HER SON

It will be difficult, but you need to write a final chapter for this story

Thanks for you work. I enjoyed it greatly!

I can understand why Albert is so crazy about Christine; She is one of the sexyist woman that I have read about.

I love that she can't resist her son and gives herself to him totally without regard to her life and marriage.

I like that the author hasn't given the reader an absolute finish to the story, and lets one to finish it in their own mind.

I have really enjoyed reading this series of chapters, and have to say it's one of the best. Way beyond being good, the author has captured feelings of a woman that wants to be loved by a man that wants her completly and won't take no for an answer.

It seems that Albert has shown his mother some new ways to have an orgasm, when he went down on her, and that scene was very visual and erotic to me.

This is the first of the author's work that I have read, but it certainly won't be the last.

Thank you, for what I think is a job well done in erotic literature.

Fabulous! Well writen, grammar impecable. I am waiting for more, with cock in hand...;>)

Christine, you have an amazing ability to draw pictures with words. I absolutely adore your writing. More please. Much more...

So tempting, ChristineR. You come alive in my fertile mind. So tempting.

Keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for your next submissions.....

Well written and oh so erotic.

Some of the best erotica I have read.

the author has the ability to make the sex scenes to come alive.

Wonderfully done, thanks

better became best gonna read the fifth one

but.....what's going to happen with the Dad????

And the fellow fan who wrote "moms wanting their sons" raises an intriguing question. How many mothers the way the lady in this excellent story acts? My guess is, lots and lots more than a stupidly puritanical society cares to hear about. Know what? A mother is a woman, with a woman's passionate needs between her legs. When she's got a strapping young male in the house, her own son, who's at the height of his sexual prowess, mom's thoughts turn to what her kid's got jumping around in his pants. She knows that her boy's got everything she needs to assuage her cuntal needs--a fine fat cock that's the hardest around and a pair of heavy loaded balls that never quit. His hot young balls are constantly filled and refilled with the warm creamy semen that's so very soothing to his mother's cunt, which happens to be the cunt he came out of. The most natural combination in the world, a son's penis and his mother's vagina.

Legally, this is a mutually consensual incestuous love story between a mother and son. In reality, this is a love story between a mature man and woman who love each other unconditionally and limitlessly who happen to be mother and son. The woman has found a man who loves her for who she is, a mature, sensual and sexual female human being who deserves to be loved without question or condition. The man has found a woman who has done and will do anything and everything in the world to please him and love him without restraint. Love always finds a way.