All Comments on 'Temptation's Kiss Ch. 01'

This was a great story, well written and had the perfect amount of background and action. I was extremely surprised there were no other comments, and feel honored to be the first one.

I never actually have bothered to comment a story before, but this was so worth it.

Great story and thanks for sharing your talent. I like the details of their first encounter. Can't wait to read more. BTW, complements as well to your excellent editing skills.