by Tamara_Dane
I enjoyed this. Well written and well developed. Well, I like anal! One of the best I have read for a while. Keep up the good work and give us more of your {anal?] adventures.
Mike
You have a gift for writing so vividly that everything you write goes from my eyes to my brain and to my throbbing cock. This ole' cowboy had to reload twice reading this. Thanks!!
The story's there. You just need a little work on your delivery, a little more work up to the actual encounter (even though that was the basis of your characters) It might have been the changing points of view that threw me a couple times too.
Keep it up!
I so enjoyed your prose. Very arousing.
Ms Tamara...to be honest, this is the first Anal story I ever liked...wow.
I also really like this story. I have to admit, I can't decide what was more erotic: the story or the thought of you thinking about and creating this story :-)
I loved the story. I hope you keep going on with more stories.. We see you are in ton being tied up and your ass being whipped and take it up the ass.
What other things ar you into?