All Comments on 'Teri's Golf Game'

Really not worth a comment.

However there is also lots of room for improvement. You would benefit from using one of the volunteer editors on this site, as there were a number of grammar errors that really distracted from the story. Also, for this story you would do well to provide a little more background, perhaps filling in a little of the backstory between the wife and Tom, so that it makes sense rather than being sprung on us in the middle of the story. Finally, you kind of left the story hanging - I know it says that it is to be continued, but unless you are planning to make this story have three or more parts, you are probably better off combining parts one and two into a single, longer story. You have obviously set this up for the wife to be gangbanged on the 19th hole, so why not just get it done?

It definately isnt a loving wives tale. Perhaps the better category is group sex. She was nude and had sex on a public golf course traveling around it on open display while be fingered and sexually used, perhaps exhibitionism is the category. She is now the sex toy of three men besides her husband. She is a willing slut who was undoubtably seen by others and will have many stories told on her and comeons from others she doesnt even know. The blatant bareback sex with people she virtually knows no sexual history of nor medical testing of opens the doors to many types of diseases including STDs and AIDS. I will say there is not marriage here.

Getting confused between reality and fantasy again WTF.

The wroter is a little boy. Pwerhaps he's a legal aged one but he's still a little boy. Does he really think real people are going to get off on his little boy fantasy. Get real and grow up.

is a product of a good imagination. I don't understand why anyone would put it down considering that at least one commentor can't even spell "writer' let alone all the other words. Again, if a story doesn't appeal to you, go onto the next one. But, trashing a good, imaginative story is simply unfair.

Rather juvenile.

Whats to get.Everyone plays golf with their dicks out,espically with their wives along.Every good golfer has come home with their wives covered in other guys cum.Jeez,you think I haven't played golf.I just think this has been so over done,how about something original like a card game and a stupid bet or your office party and your wife is the only woman there or a pool party and the wives leave cause your wife is such a slut and just you and her and the single guys and a few assholes stay.Now that would be hot.An editor would be a big help.Make sure all the guys get a copy of tape of action at your house espically when big dick fucks the little woman senseless,oh ya,don't forget,she loves ya,baby.

There used to be some standards on this website. Now, there are none.

When you don't respect yourself [by writing wimpish male self humiliation] who can like or respect your work??<P>

So far just the weak freak from kangaruland. And even he could write a stroke story better than this without humiliating someone.<P>

Jeez - this isn't erotic or arousing - just sick crap without any value.

Okay I don't know how many people have joined this site or how many read the stories on this site but the percentage of people who get off on this type of story must be very small.Yes there are swingers,cuck,milfs whatever they happen to be who might enjoy this type of fantasy and they probably act it out in real life too but this is a plea to the powers that be please can we have a sexy loving wives section where no actual extra marital sex happens and then have a seperate section for just cheating or exrta marital sex and you know that this will happen in every story that way a writer does not have to write a disclaimer they can go straight for it and us the readers know exactly whats going on.and this might sound strange but I do like loving wives stories the problem is many stories just lately are not stories at all this tale is one of them when I tried to write a story some time ago a wise author said to me if I was going to write a story let there be a point to it this story and many others like it DO NOT have a point.

It is true what some of the commentators are saying. This site needs a slut wife section so that those who write them and or enjoy reading them can go straight there.

By the way the correct spelling is Kangaroo.

A very imaginative story. I like the "contest" element that developed. By the way if you read the sub text of the Loving Wives category you will find that this site doesn't need a "Slut Wife" section as the the "Loving Wives" section is exactly that. If the powers that be on this site wanted to be more descriptive that would be up to them. Still it would stop the meatheaded evangelicals from commenting on these types of stories though.

There is a very gay aspect to this story.Never heard of 4 guys spending the day with their dicks hanging out checking each other out.Then hubbie would rather watch and film big dick fuck up the wife than join in. hopefully big dick will fuck hubbie too and make them both his bitches.

If you want stories involving 1 on 1 sex between husbands and their wives, check out Erotic couplings!!!!

I'm getting sick of those loonies commenting on these kind of stories, letting us know they HATE it.

I AM NOT INTERESTED IN YOUR EROTIC LIKES/DISLIKES!

'Loving Wives' is pefect for these kind of stories.

Maybe you cannot read, but it says: "Tales of adventurous married women & their mates."

I do not know about you losers, but this is adventurous.

It doesn't say with how many other people, or in what way.

Erotic Couplings: "Wild one-on-one consensual sex."

Now.. there is information you might need. ONE-ON-ONE !

If you only want to read THAT, visit EROTIC COUPLINGS!

Is that clear??!?!

Very brave of you to not give your name and exuse me for having an opinion last I looked this was a free speech site which just in case you did not understand that bit it means we the readers can say exactly what we want about a story. sorry if you dont agree with this but you know what i respect your opinion simply because thats what free speech is all about.And as for your go to erotic couplings I have and there are some great stories there I also read almost all the sections on this site although and I'm not bashing gay people but that section just does nothing for me although having said that two woman having sex looks far more erotic than two men having sex I can't think why!(sorry english humour).At least when I have somthing to say I let people know who said it perhaps you could do the same thing.and by the way IT IS possiable to have an adventureous wife and still not have sex outside of the marriage myself and my wife do it all the time who knows if you want me to let you know what we do let me know.

Oh yes... like posting as GW66 from oxfordshire UK is such a 'brave' thing to do....

Maybe you didn't know, but internet is kinda anonymous... or did you think I would travel to oxfordshire and ask every person I meet if he is GW66?

So please do not give me "oh so brave, you are posting as anonymous" speech, because it is irrelevant.

Now... I totally agree with free speech, I do not agree with bashing. You don't bash in the gay section, because you not even read the stories, it isn't your cup of tea.

Seems to me that is the proper thing to do. Respecting others with what they like and leave them alone if you do not agree.

Now I do not understand why you cannot do the same for this section?

You do know that loving wives mostly consists of stories involving a wife that has sex with persons than her husband.

Apparently you do not agree with that, and feel that stories like that need a seperate 'slut wife' section or something like that.

I totally disagree on that, since I think that people who write stories about a wife's one-on-ones with her husband, should ALWAYS post it in the erotic couplings stories.

Kinda the same outcome, but different solution.

Literotica does not need a new section, Literotica needs proper use of the current sections.

And sure... post some stories about adventures of you and your wife. I like reading all kinds of stories, I just hate people who are bashing these kind of stories all the time because it is not their cup of tea ( at least.. that is what they say.. I'm still puzzled why some of them comment on it EVERY DAY... they must like the stories more than they will admit I guess...)

Well I enjoyed the story. Yes it's a fantasy and unrealistic but I do enjoy stories of women letting go and enjoying their sexuality.