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en_extaseen_extaseover 17 years ago
Very fun, but short

I thought this was a great MC story, and it had a plot that wasn't too overdone. I really enjoyed the fact that the hypnotist had to betray her friend for someone other than herself; very hot! My only wish is that it had been longer. Maybe exploring the reluctance of the betrayal and the guilt that she felt as she watched her friend turn into a mindless slut, and how the protagonist had to cope with that combatting her arousal at the same time. I guess I'm just saying I wanted more! Thanks for sharing this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
"Great Story!"

Hi! I loved your story. Maybe we can talk about it sometime. Email me to Staciejupitor2@yahoo.com

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