All Comments on 'Terri and Anthony Ch. 02'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 6 years ago
So erotic

Masterfully crafted story from start to finish. Their love for each other surpasses the boundaries society puts on them.

SweatermeatSweatermeatabout 6 years ago
Outstanding!

Great story line! Would love to read more!

rodavrodavabout 6 years ago
Very nicely done

The dialogue was really great. Specially when the mom told Anthony the reguirements for the sex to happen again.

Not hurried and with some hesitation makes it interesting and exciting.

Please continue with another chapter.

ManoBlueManoBlueabout 6 years ago
Come on

Why is the Mom's in these stories always catching the Son's talking to their self moaning, who does that.

rodavrodavabout 6 years ago

I also like when the mom is taller her son.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
First rate again

Excellent story. Keep going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
You still need an editor...

Here's a prime example of why:

"I do," he said as he leapt out of bed and raced passed her into her room.

The correct tense of the word should be "past" instead of "passed".

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477salmost 5 years ago
Sorry

But stopped reading after not fucking for a week alone only to fuck when everyone was home. 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Three months after......pregnant!???

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very nice story 5 stars

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