All Comments on 'Tess & Uncle John Ch. 02'

where is ch 1

Yes, Where is chapter 1? It sort of makes it kind of nice when one can read the begining of a story.

I wrote chapter one and two at the same time and chapter one was rejected. I'll get on it. Sorry.

The story, while short, could have been so much better with an editor. Your lack of quotation marks made it so hard to read. I want chapter 3 to be so much better. The nice little plot twist of Tess accidentally letting the whole "Daddy" thing out gives this even more promise. Please, get someone to edit your story before submitting it.