All Comments on 'Test Subjects'

by TheBenedictine

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Absurd?

You used the word absurd in your story, which I must say pretty much describes the whole thing. But I have to admit I kind of liked it. If you write future chapters I'll have to read them just to see where you take it. I like the possibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
that was good!

Clever and witty, I enjoyed it very much. Especially the end..."Boy, I never liked you very much...."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
?

Is there going to be a second chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Where's part two ?! I've been waiting since this one came out for part two.

C_frommnC_frommnabout 11 years ago
Nice Start

But you leave open the Idea that there will be more. Come on he has his wife and Niece not to mention others he could bring to the Harem. Like the Deans wife or Daughter?

porsonporsonalmost 11 years ago
Another

So want to see part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
please write more

please continue your story so much potential for humiliation or weird requests to the 2 altered women, so exciting...

cool_sega_dudecool_sega_dudealmost 9 years ago
Please you must continue!

The last anonymous comment is also me... I really like your story you should continue it !

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