All Comments on 'Testing the Waters'

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ohio

Very well done. You had me fooled completely.

liked the story very much. look forward to more. didn't realize it was a dream until you wanted me to.

On point...superbly captioned: the use of imagery, wording and commitment to dialogue, especially in the slight/steamy conflicts.

Thanks for a great story...usually I'm all about more intensive, orgasmic descriptions; however, I felt satisfied and understood it was all in the context of the piece (essential for all storywriters).

Bravo!