All Comments on 'Thank Goodness For Rainy Days'

and it could have been a great story. But the odd misplaced words and spelling errors detracted from the continuity. I know the spelling checkers don't catch everything, especially the words that sound the same and have dual meanings. Sometimes the alternative is to have someone else read it through before submitting. Good luck and please keep writing.

for a first time writer great story and good context. keep writting you have the hang of it

Please keep write in the same level erotic becaus you have the feels to

This was generally a well told story, but as the previous reader suggested, you had some misspellings and some minor stylistic problems. Many people continuewriting at this level, never making an effort to improve, but you can do better. Get an editor and remember: telling a story in writing is not simply transcribing the way a story would be told orally.