All Comments on 'Thank You'

by Rayross673

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very Enjoyable Read

Thank you for your interesting and touching story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story. Wrong category.

Good story. Wrong category.

sj_53sj_53over 6 years ago
Not the wrong category

First in mouth and first swallow. As a guy like Nicholas who has never had a woman swallow his cum, I loved the story, it stoked my own fantasy while I stroked to a powerful orgasm. Thanks Angela, for a minute there I was Nicholas. Thanks also to Rayross673 for writing the story.

Photo_GWPhoto_GWover 6 years ago
Fun and erotic

Great story idea, well written, and fun. Thanks!

By the way, a tip: semen doesn't smell or taste bad if you have a good diet and lifestyle. I'm a vegan and my cum barely smells and actually has a sweet taste.

MediocreAuthorMediocreAuthorover 1 year ago

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site. If only this could get a second chapter where the two get back together for good. 5 stars

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