All Comments on 'Thank You, Nurse'

A tale about a bunch of married people all cheating on their spouses.

Bravo for the fucking low-lifes.

negative rating

It is hilarious how the poor little feller hates every story of people enjoying one another. Yet he keeps searching these stories out to spew out his?/hers?/its? infantile choleric tantrums in the commentary.

And I post this comment knowing that this perpetual toddler will return to respond. Like a dog returning to lick it's own vomit.

2* because I wonder how could he pay to so many Nurses? Or did he pay with a fuck?

Just not sure what the long term consequences would be. Guess I'm just too selfish, insecure, and territorial to share myself or my spouse in such manner. Also too frightened, since the spouse spent years working in a STD clinic. Glad your characters are fictional, or they would be sick in more ways than the one you so well illustrate.

Fictional characters can do anything with impunity: did you ever read of James Bond using a condom or attending an STD clinic? Did you ever see Indiana Jones in hospital in traction or even wearing a plaster cast? As one wise soul once said, 'It's ok to read or write about unsafe sex, but it's not ok to do it.'

5 x worker/days costs roughly the same whether you employ 1 worker full-time or 5 part-time, casual rates usually being lower than permanent employee pay.

I didn't think I would be likely to say this, BUT :

Too much sex; Not enough story!

It was certainly not terrible ... there was enough detail provided of the way the ladies differed and, to some degree, reacted. But, Sweetie's renewed interest in connubial bliss is totally unexpected and unexplained. There was very little story beyond the initiation of new distaff excursions into dalliance!. Hubby seems to have contributed significantly to the reduction of African rhino populations!

4* anyway!

I loved the whole story. I especially loved the twist at the end. too funny. Nice work

Definitely not funny. Silly as hell, but nothing funny about a bunch of whores.