by Nakod Apa
Makes me realise how long it is since I last went to the pub or went for a walk along the beach.
More romance stories dear Sir, you do it well.
Excellent, well-written story. I was half hoping that we might find that "Aunt Liz" would help to teach Bea as well :-)
This is the only writing I have commented on so far, due to lack of originality or creativity. This piece made it seem as if it were not just a "smut" story but a romantic piece. I adore your writing and look forward to reading more in the future,
Anonymous
Enjoyable, didn't skip anything. Was like a book you can't put down. Loved it.
Am I the only one who is disappointed? I'm disappointed in him cheating on her. Ok, he felt guilty and he vowed to himself that he'd never do it again, however how could she take it so cool? I'm more disappointed in her reaction! Instead of being at least a little hurt, she just assumed that it's normal because he is a man, and bulls need more than one cow? I mean, is this love? Being with somebody and giving them permission to sleep with others because they need it? That's Fuck Buddies... When you love someone, you want exclusiveness. And if you are ready to give them the freedom to sleep around, it will hurt like hell, and if it doesn't then it's not love.
Very well written. EXCEPT for the complete crap that a guy needs many women, but the woman only needs one man. What kind of pure bullshit is that???