by RenegadeBelle
and read all three parts. It is a wonderful read so far and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Well done.
can't wait for the next chapter. Terrific story and believable three dimensional characters. Wonderful writing. Can't wait to read the rest of the story.
I just read all three chapters, and have to tell you, I LOVE IT! I hope you post more soon!
Great job!
Beautifully written with truly engaging characters!! I cannot wait for more...
It's like an old love story of the 50's. A great start and I hope it won't be long to read the next chapter. Thanks
It is excellent writing, but I think it is much more 2000s than 1950s. Supported by three best friends, one of which is male, young woman gets soused to forget cheating boy friend, stumbles into lap of very attractive male, drags (accompanied by her friends) him home to her bed, and then neither one can forget the other after that night - those actions are very 2000ish, NOT at all 1950s. A good, interesting story line. Thanks, it is fun.
Like we didn't see that coming from a mile away when you revealed that the first venue was double booked. 😆
I still gave you a 5/5 in spite of the plethora of TYPE MISMATCH ERRORS littering this installment. For example, "cumulated" when you meant "culminated" or most recently "they grinned at the short woman DIRECTLY them to follow her"....right...I think that you meant to say "directing them to follow". But that's only two that I'm bothering to mention when I actually saw several more.
Only one more installment remains to be read. Like I said earlier, I hope that you found an excellent ending and it appears in the last piece of work that you did so long ago. But I'm feeling very confident that you abandoned this story leaving it unfinished.