All Comments on 'That 69s Show Ch. 04'

I liked the many women and their various cup sizes that Eric encountered.

I liked the slow build to Jackie's breast expansion and that by the chapter's end she is still growing.

Jackie giving Eric a blow job was detailed and highly erotic.

Ditto for the two fucking.

With the cliff hanger, I'm wondering just how big Jackie is going to get and if any of the other females are going to grow their breasts.

Looking forward to your next posting.

Adrian Burns

I don't usually comment on feedback until I have finished the story but...

I've got three more episodes of this epic to post. The writing is done, I just have to fine tune them a little here and there. I hope you will like them. I also have two mini-episodes to come. One is done. The other is half baked and I think I'll have it done by year's end. I'll probably post them together cause neither one is of any great length.

Thanks for the feedback, Adrian, I appreciate it.

The over grown breast kinda ruin it for me