by KinkNaWink
The fact that you have incited REAL rage for Harlee means you're a great writer. Keep it coming!
It's very good but you REALLY need to proofread better or get someone to do it for you. You have a couple of areas with garbled words that make no sense and your phrasing is off in several spots making your meaning unclear. Take care of that and you should be golden. Keep at it!
Thank you so much for all the feedback you keep me wanting to continue the story!!
In regards to the comment titled Just A Note, you are right my proofreading needs to be more thorough. I always can use an extra pair of eyes to catch what mine don't. So thank you for your honesty! Xoxo KinkNaWink