All Comments on 'That Empty Feeling'

needs some work!!

Kids that like their parents don't call them by their first names.. so telling us her name is susan is good then they would call her mom the rest of the time.

Looking forward to multiple chapter in this series

I couldn't even read your story when I found 3 spelling/grammar errors in the Warning section!!! PLEASE get a proof-reader and editor!

I am very much looking forward to the next chapter! What a great start, and look forward to more VOLUME!